I'm hooked on your phonics, please keep up the voiceovers. Your prose is so musical that it makes so much sense out loud. Reading & listening at the same time changed the experience too. I can't stop and ponder and over-analyze what any part means, because I'm on a runaway train where semantic meaning & eargasms are of equal importance.
Curious... do you read drafts out loud and edit with your ear?
Idea wise: how do I pursue extreme chaos and extreme editing at the same time? If you stretch them out far enough, at what point does it pull a Pacman and become the same thing? If you can fuse impossible opposites, can you riff refined chaos in real-time?
...good q's brother...i mostly write by talking to myself, so i am guessing why it sounds right when coming out of my mouth...the words have already been there...i think the work is to just keep working...the more we [omit] and the more we [indecipherable] the closer they might be to what we are actually trying to [removed by author]...pacman in real time should be a record...
…i think the message is that if we [omitted] there is no guarantee that [unrevealed] but that doesn’t mean an unedited existence is superior to one [edited] just that we might consider [information unknown]…
I'm hooked on your phonics, please keep up the voiceovers. Your prose is so musical that it makes so much sense out loud. Reading & listening at the same time changed the experience too. I can't stop and ponder and over-analyze what any part means, because I'm on a runaway train where semantic meaning & eargasms are of equal importance.
Curious... do you read drafts out loud and edit with your ear?
Idea wise: how do I pursue extreme chaos and extreme editing at the same time? If you stretch them out far enough, at what point does it pull a Pacman and become the same thing? If you can fuse impossible opposites, can you riff refined chaos in real-time?
...good q's brother...i mostly write by talking to myself, so i am guessing why it sounds right when coming out of my mouth...the words have already been there...i think the work is to just keep working...the more we [omit] and the more we [indecipherable] the closer they might be to what we are actually trying to [removed by author]...pacman in real time should be a record...
Agree. The voice-overs are a game-[redacted]. Your writing has a musical quality. Now we get to hear it.
[slyly sarcastic comment redacted]
Fuck [redacted]!
Oh excuse me, I meant [redacted] yeah! Love this one.
[redacted] you!
This is one of my [redacted] pieces by you. Quack quack, [b-i-t-c deleted].
Can't believe you still call it a 'cell phone' and that you still have it ring for a call.
…how have i not thrown this in the ocean yet?…
Not clever enough to comment. must go edit my entire personality
I [removed for brevity]!
So what's the takeaway here?
…i think the message is that if we [omitted] there is no guarantee that [unrevealed] but that doesn’t mean an unedited existence is superior to one [edited] just that we might consider [information unknown]…